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TROUBLE IN PARADISE, CHAPTER IV: Measured Justice


CHAPTER IV OF A SEVEN PART STORY


His name was Daniel Mercer, though in Fort Stockton he quickly became “Danny” whether he liked it or not.

He was thirty-four years old, which in West Texas is that delicate age where you are either “a promising young man” or “a boy who hasn’t learned better yet.” It depends entirely on who is talking and whether you just indicted their cousin, repossessed their brother-in-law’s boat, or declined to wave at them at the Dairy Twin.

Daniel had been in Pecos County exactly one year and twelve days when the doubts began to outnumber the reassurances. He knew the number because he kept track of things like that. Dates mattered. Timelines mattered. In his line of work, one day could mean the difference between justice and a mistrial.

He had grown up in Temple, the son of a high school government teacher and a nurse who believed in casseroles as both food and therapy. His father graded civics papers at the kitchen table and spoke about the Constitution the way other men spoke about deer leases. His mother measured compassion in Pyrex dishes.

Daniel was bright early, serious in a way that made other children suspicious. While his classmates traded baseball cards and learned to spit sunflower seeds with aim, Daniel organized mock trials in the garage, assigning neighborhood kids the roles of prosecutor, defense counsel, bailiff, and occasionally livestock. The dog was once charged with aggravated chewing.

He liked rules. He liked that the law had weight to it. He liked that, at least in theory, it did not care who your uncle was, who you prayed beside, or what your last name unlocked in a town square.

He went to the University of Texas for undergrad, then to law school in Houston, and eventually found himself in Waco as an Assistant District Attorney. Waco was polite about him. Waco even liked him. He worked hard, stayed late, won cases that others thought too messy to touch.

But Waco had expectations.

He was not Baptist.

He had not graduated from Baylor.

He learned these were not disqualifications so much as permanent asterisks, hovering quietly beside his name like footnotes no one would read aloud.

He was told, gently and in hallway tones, that he had a future. A good one. Just not there. Not at the top. Not in that building with that plaque and those portraits lining the hall.

“You’re talented,” a senior prosecutor once said, hand resting on his shoulder with the sympathy of a man who would never have to leave. “Just… not the right fit for this community.”

Daniel understood exactly what that meant. He also understood that ambition has a shelf life. It either ripens or it rots. And he had no intention of going soft in the corner.

When the Pecos County position opened up, it arrived like a telegram from another century.

Young, ambitious county seeking reform-minded District Attorney. Competitive package. Housing stipend. Vehicle included.

Vehicle included.

He had driven through Fort Stockton once, years earlier, on his way to El Paso. He remembered dust and a Dairy Twin sign that looked like it had survived both war and fashion. He remembered thinking the sky seemed larger there, as if nothing had the authority to interrupt it, not even doubt.

He accepted the job after two phone calls and one uneasy meeting with Mayor Goodman.

Mayor Goodman had a handshake that lasted half a beat too long and a smile that suggested he had already calculated you. He wore his red tie like a campaign banner and spoke in sentences that sounded pre-approved.

Daniel did not like him, but he respected the frankness with which the mayor described the opportunity.



“We need a fresh face,” Goodman had said. “Someone who isn’t tangled up in family trees and old football rivalries.”

Daniel wondered if that was true. He also wondered if Goodman assumed a fresh face would be easier to guide, easier to nudge, easier to blame.

Despite his misgivings, Daniel signed.

The employment package included free use of a car, which in Pecos County meant more than transportation. It meant standing. It meant visibility. It meant you were part of the machinery, whether you understood how the gears fit together or not.

The car was a 1996 Buick Roadmaster, finished in blue so deep it looked black at dusk, with silver and gold pinstripes running along the flanks like a decorative promise. The bright side moldings featured gray-painted accents and extended cleanly to the front and rear bumpers, as if the car had been designed to be measured with a ruler and judged accordingly.

It wore a vertically slatted grille and a hood ornament that caught the sun like an accusation. Dual exhaust outlets hinted at authority without ever needing to announce it.

The 15-inch steel wheels wore chrome covers that reflected courthouse steps, pump jacks, and gas station lights alike. They were mounted with 235/70 Uniroyal Tiger Paw XTM whitewall tires, which Daniel privately found both dignified and faintly ridiculous. The sort of tires a man could prosecute in.

Stopping power came from power-assisted front disc and rear drum anti-lock brakes. In a town like this, that felt metaphorical.

The cabin featured front and rear bench seating upholstered in gray leather, soft in the winter, punishing in August. It had the Collectors Edition package, cruise control, power windows and locks, a CD/cassette stereo with Concert Sound II speakers, and air conditioning that worked when it felt like it.

There were stains on the carpet behind the driver’s seat. Daniel did not ask about them. In his profession, some histories were better left for later discovery.

The leather-wrapped steering wheel framed a 120-mph speedometer and gauges for coolant temperature and fuel level. He often watched the needle hover at exactly 60 on the long stretches of I-10, wondering how fast a reputation could travel in a place where everyone knew which pew you favored.

Under the hood, the 5.7-liter LT1 V8 had once been rated at 260 horsepower and 330 lb-ft of torque. Oil leaked from the front and rear main seals, leaving small black commas on the cardboard he kept beneath it in the garage of his rented house on Jackson Street. He slid that cardboard into place each night like a quiet apology.

Power was sent to the rear wheels through a four-speed automatic transmission. The car shifted smoothly, even when the town did not.



On his first day, he parked the Roadmaster in front of the Pecos County Courthouse and felt the weight of being watched. Rusty Hammer leaned against the courthouse railing with a cup of coffee and a look that said he had seen better men and worse and planned to reserve judgment until further notice.

Lucinda at Grounds for Divorce learned his order by the second week. Black coffee, no sugar. She studied him the way she studied everyone, as if she were cross-referencing souls against a ledger only she could see.



Trixie from KLIP-N-DYE offered to “clean him up” for the next election cycle, though he hadn’t announced any such intention. “That hair says assistant,” she told him. “We need it to say incumbent.”

Daniel liked Fort Stockton in theory. He liked the rhythm of it, the way cases moved at a human pace rather than a bureaucratic one. He liked that jurors knew the defendants by name and sometimes by blood, which made verdicts heavier but truer.

But he quickly discovered that in a town this size, justice did not operate in a vacuum. It operated in a web.

He prosecuted a DUI case against the nephew of a well-connected rancher and received three polite invitations to reconsider. One came with barbecue. One came with scripture. One came with a reminder about campaign season. He declined each one, carefully, respectfully.

He reviewed a contract involving city funds and a contractor who happened to donate generously to the mayor’s campaigns. He found irregularities. He found rounding that felt less like math and more like choreography. He did not yet know what to do with them.

He attended church occasionally, rotating among congregations so as not to appear aligned. He did not suddenly become Baptist. He did not enroll in Baylor’s alumni newsletter. He remained what he had always been: earnest, stubborn, slightly out of step.

Mayor Goodman summoned him more than once for what were described as “strategic conversations.” These were sessions in which Goodman spoke at length about optics, about harmony, about not stirring up ghosts that had been carefully buried beneath limestone and tradition.

Daniel listened. He nodded. He drove home in the Roadmaster and watched the temperature gauge creep a notch higher than usual, wondering whether the engine was warning him or merely aging.



There were nights when he sat at his kitchen table, case files spread out, the hum of the air conditioner competing with the distant sound of freight trains cutting across the dark. He wondered whether he had mistaken opportunity for escape.

In Waco, he had been capped. Here, he was untested.

The town had begun to reveal its layers. There were alliances that predated him by decades. There were favors owed and favors remembered. There were things everyone knew but no one said aloud, as if silence were a civic duty.

He began to suspect that the stains on the carpet behind the driver’s seat of the Buick were not the only remnants of previous occupants.

Still, he vowed to try.

He started a monthly community forum at the courthouse, inviting residents to ask questions about the office. The first meeting drew twelve people, three of whom were related. The second drew more. Rusty came, arms crossed, asking about property theft and whether it counted if the thief was kin. Sister Thelma came, asking about restorative justice and redemption. Chad from the Piggly Wiggly came, mostly to see how easy it might be to get traffic violations dismissed in the future, and left disappointed but amused.

Daniel answered patiently. He spoke about transparency, about fairness, about the difference between vengeance and accountability. He spoke about the law as something that should not bend simply because it was inconvenient.

He meant every word.

He began to build a small staff of his own choosing, young attorneys willing to relocate, willing to believe that a place like Pecos County could be both traditional and principled. They rented small houses, learned where to park on the square, and discovered quickly that everyone in town knew where they worked.

He drove the Roadmaster out past the city limits some evenings, letting the LT1 V8 stretch its legs. The dual exhaust hummed beneath him, steady and confident. The oil still leaked. He kept driving.

He was having second thoughts. Anyone who says otherwise in a place like this is lying to themselves or running for office.

But doubt, he had learned, is not the same as surrender.

He had not come to Fort Stockton to be liked. He had come to do the job that had been quietly withheld from him elsewhere. He had come to test whether measured justice could exist in a town that preferred inherited certainty.

On the one-year anniversary of his hiring, he parked the Buick beneath the courthouse clock. The blue paint caught the late afternoon light, the silver and gold pinstripes glowing faintly like a restrained celebration.

He rested his hands on the leather-wrapped steering wheel and looked at the gauges. Fuel just under half. Coolant steady. Speedometer at zero.

Measured.

He stepped out of the car and straightened his tie.

Fort Stockton watched.

When he got back to his office and settled in, the phone rang.



It was Chief Martin.

Danny and Chief Martin spoke frequently and got down to business as quickly as possible, each man not fully understanding or appreciating the talents of the other. The chief didn’t have much use for lawyers beyond warrants and signatures. Danny felt there were dots between the chief and the mayor that had no business being connected. But they were forced to work together when needed, like two mismatched tools in the same drawer.

“You got yourself your very first murder trial, Son.” Danny thought he could detect a chuckle in the chief’s voice, the kind of chuckle that suggested the day had already gotten interesting. “Outta be an easy one, though. He’s already confessed.”

The day before, Chief Martin had been called out to the Melba Duncan place. Nobody had actually seen or heard from the bitter old woman for months. She had not attended church. She had not sent her driver to town. She had not complained publicly about property taxes, which for Melba was a form of silence.

Finally, her son Douglas had decided to call the FSPD and have someone do a welfare check.

Standing in the marble-tiled entry hall of the home, beneath a chandelier that looked like it had once intimidated lesser fortunes, the chief had been greeted warmly by Melba’s companion of the last year or so. Howie had the kind of smile that seemed rehearsed but never revised.

The chief’s eye drifted toward the kitchen, where a freezer chest sat against the far wall.

The fact that a wealthy old woman who never hunted and usually had her meals prepared by staff would even own a freezer chest struck the chief as off, even with his relative lack of any real experience with high society crime. The fact that the lid was taped closed with what seemed like an industrial surplus of duct tape compounded his suspicions.

“What’s in the freezer, Howie?”

“Oh, just the regular things you keep in a freezer. Some Swanson TV Dinners. A few leftovers. Some Blue Bell ice cream. Melba loves a dish of ice cream while we watch Andy Griffith reruns.” Howie was smiling the entire time he spoke, as if nostalgia were a seasoning.

“Mind if I take a look-see?”

“Why certainly not. Help yourself,” Howie replied, stepping aside with a flourish that bordered on hospitality.

The chief peeled back six different layers of duct tape before he was able to lift the lid. The adhesive clung stubbornly, as if reluctant to surrender its secret. Once he did, there were layers of frozen food just as Howie had described, stacked neatly and cold as compliance. Hungry Man dinners. Swanson boxes. A half-eaten lemon chess pie from the Grounds for Divorce, the label still taped to the tin.

There at the bottom of the freezer, beneath all the food containers and packages, was Melba Duncan wrapped in a floral percale sheet, as tidy in death as she had been in life.

“I shot her four times in the back about five months ago,” Howie said. “I was going to finish the pie after supper.”

Both statements were delivered with the exact same level of emotion.

The smile on his face never changed.



5 responses to “TROUBLE IN PARADISE, CHAPTER IV: Measured Justice”

  1. Dang, what’s up with THAT, Howie?

    My social media feed tells me that “Psycho” is on TCM tonight. I can almost hear the music in the halls of the Duncan mansion…reet reet reet.

  2. Well shucks – this is all too tidy!
    Didn’t the Captain mention one time that he had lots of old 78 records, Jazz, Blues, Muddy Waters.

    Anybody ever been to the Big Oaks, or LouAnns?

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