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COMIN’ HOME, Chapter I


This is the first chapter of a six-chapter story that will run all week.


In Fort Stockton, Texas, you can’t go ten minutes without somebody either fixin’ something that doesn’t need fixin’ or talkin’ about somebody who doesn’t want to be talked about. So when Eddie Ray Sinclair rolled through town in a black-over-red leather 1967 Cadillac DeVille Convertible, it wasn’t just a car—it was a parade float for one.

He’d left town twenty-three years prior with a guitar case and a head full of lies about how he was gonna make it in Nashville. Now here he was, leaner, grayer, and still very much full of it, behind the wheel of something that looked like it had been stolen from Elvis’ garage.

The Cadillac glided down Main Street like it was allergic to potholes, top down, radio playing Waylon Jennings at a volume that made the Methodist preschoolers across the street question their life choices. The paint job was a glossy black that shimmered like wet oil under the West Texas sun, and the red leather seats looked like they’d been stitched by angels in a honky-tonk.

Eddie Ray parked it right outside Lucky Lady Lounge—because nothing says “I’ve changed” like showing up in the exact same place you made a damn fool of yourself in 1999.

Inside, Hank was still tending bar, just with stronger reading glasses and a lower tolerance for nonsense.



“Well I’ll be dipped in diesel,” he said, squinting through the smoke. “Eddie Ray Sinclair in the flesh. What’s it been—twenty years since you played ‘Free Bird’ three times in one set and fell off the stage tryin’ to kiss Sharla Maye?”

“I maintain the floor moved,” Eddie Ray said, sliding onto a stool like he’d never left.

Hank poured him a Lone Star without asking. “So what brings you back?”

“Redemption. Closure. Possibly a warrant—I haven’t checked the mail.”

Outside, the Cadillac drew a crowd. Half the town figured it was a movie car. The other half assumed Eddie Ray must’ve gotten rich swindling tech stocks or marrying up.

By sundown, word had spread. Chief Martin came by just to say howdy and low-key check for plates. Pearl Branson nearly had a coronary when she saw him and had to sit down on the bench in front of the Rusty Hammer hardware store, clutching her chest like a Civil War widow.

But Eddie Ray wasn’t here to make waves. He was here because, after all this time, he missed the sound of gravel under boots and the kind of gossip you can taste in your sweet tea.

He left the lounge around nine, the Cadillac sparkling under the parking lot lights like a prom queen with secrets. He slid behind the wheel, flipped on the high beams, and peeled out in that smooth, unhurried way that only an old car and an older man can manage.

The truth was, Eddie Ray didn’t have a plan. But in Fort Stockton, a plan’s overrated. All you need is a full tank, a second chance, and maybe a convertible big enough to turn heads and carry regrets.

And as the Cadillac rumbled down the highway, red leather glowing beneath the moonlight, Eddie Ray lit a cigarette with the car’s original lighter, turned up the radio, and whispered to the night, “Let’s try this again.”

The Cadillac purred like it agreed.

Truth was, Eddie Ray’s return had less to do with nostalgia and more to do with necessity. From Nashville to Hollywood, he’d left behind a trail of ex-wives with better lawyers and worse tempers, not to mention a few bookies who still had his name scribbled on the back of their hands in permanent marker. Between alimony, interest, and the occasional tab he forgot to pay, his financial portfolio consisted of one very maxed-out American Express card and a Cadillac with more character than resale value.

The Caddy and his guitar were the only two things in the world Eddie Ray owned outright.  Free and clear.  Finished in Saddle Black, the car came equipped with a three-speed automatic transmission, 15″ steel wheels with Cadillac covers, whitewall tires, power steering and brakes, chrome trim, power windows, front and rear bench seats, and a push-button AM/FM radio, and enough attitude to make up for whatever mojo Eddie Ray may have felt like he was losing.

Of course the beast had power-assisted steering.  “This car is meant to be driven with one hand, the other hanging out the window,” he told one young lady friend soon after he got it.  He wouldn’t be hanging any bare skin over the side of that Saddle Black painted door in the brutal sunshine of Fort Stockton, that’s for damn sure.

The 429 cubic inch V8 provided better back-up sounds than any of the singers he’d ever employed for the albums he’d cut in Nashville, even those who’d shown him additional companionship outside the studio.  Off the clock.  A replacement water pump, radiator, heater, distributor cap and rotor, thermostat, fan clutch, and drive belts were installed before he left Tennessee.  On his American Express, of course.  He was saving all the cash he could.  He knew he could float the AM EX bill for a while before they serious about wanting their money.

He checked into the Naughty Pine Motel on the edge of town—the only place that wouldn’t blink twice at a man paying with plastic and requesting a room farthest from the ice machine. Room 3 smelled faintly of cigarettes and pine-scented ambition, but it had a bed, a working AC unit, and a mini-fridge that buzzed like it had opinions.

Eddie Ray didn’t want anyone in town to know he was out of options. Not yet. Not while he still had charm left to spend. Maybe—just maybe—an old flame would take him in, though it’d have to be her idea. He still had pride, even if it was running on fumes.

He flopped down on the scratchy motel bed, stared at the ceiling, and told himself: Tomorrow, he’d figure something out. Or at least find somebody who thought he already had.



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