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MERCURY, GOLD, AND IRON: Chapter 1


Kip Rudyard was confused the minute he stepped into Frontier Ford-Lincoln-Mercury, “Home of the Straight Shootin’ Deal.” It was late fall of 1961, the kind of crisp West Texas day where the dust in the air made the sun look like it had been dipped in bourbon. Kip, forty-one, stood just inside the big glass door, wind-tousled hair stiff from Brylcreem, his shirt half-untucked beneath a worn canvas jacket that had seen more barbed wire than buttonholes. He was a tall man with calloused hands, a boot scuff to his walk, and a face that looked like it had forgotten how to smile without effort. His blue jeans were pressed, but the creases had grown faint. That morning he’d shaved for the first time in a week, just in case he spotted someone from church.

He always bought his cars at Frontier. Always dealt with Rodger. That’s just how things were done. But today, something felt off.

Rodger, still trim and slicked back like a Tony Curtis understudy, noticed the hesitation and offered his hand. “You alright there, Kip?”

“I don’t know whether I should crap and go blind, or fart and close one eye,” Kip muttered, scanning the showroom like a man who’d wandered into the future and didn’t like the lighting.

“It’s a big year for changes at the Ford Motor Company,” Rodger said with a grin. “Takes some getting used to.”

“Damn sure does,” Kip said, pointing across the floor. “What the hell is that?”

“That,” Rodger said proudly, “is the brand-new Lincoln Continental. They scaled it down, cleaned it up. Took off all the extra chrome, got rid of the sharp edges. Shaved off a foot and a half of excess. She’s the only four-door convertible in America now. Maybe the world.”

Kip walked around the car like it might bite him. “I’ll be damned. Kind of grows on you.”

He kept walking, pausing at a Thunderbird that looked like it had fallen off the side of a rocket. “This one looks like it’s got afterburners.”

“That’s the idea,” Rodger said. “Jet age, Kip. Everyone wants to feel like they’re about to take off.”

Then Kip spotted the 1961 Galaxie sedan over by Rodger’s desk. “At least I know what this is. Looks more like my ’57 Sunliner than that chrome spaceship y’all put out last year.”

“Exactly. Ford reined it in. No more wild fins. Brought back the big round taillights so nobody confuses us with a Studebaker again.”

Kip nodded, still a little dazed. Then he caught sight of the gold convertible parked over near the Ladies Room. “Cheese ’n crackers! What the hell is that?” His voice cracked like a man spotting a ghost—or a vision.

“That,” Rodger said, puffing up, “is the brand-new Mercury Monterey. Just came in this week. That color? Gold Dust Metallic. Only available on the Mercury. Can’t even get it on a Lincoln.”

The car gleamed like honey in the sun, with curves that suggested both restraint and luxury.

“Looks like a bagel in a bucket of grits,” Kip said, eyes squinting, lips curling upward for the first time all day.

“Practical, too,” Rodger said. “Same basic frame as the Galaxie, but with more bells and whistles. Power steering, power brakes, gold and white vinyl benches. That engine’s an X-code 352 V8, good for 220 horses and 336 foot-pounds of torque. Three-speed automatic.”

The triple taillights on each rear quarter reminded Kip of the Impalas he used to admire when the high school boys rolled through town trying to look older than they were. But the front—concave grille, headlights like twin flashbulbs—looked like nothing else on the road.

“I really like how this thing looks,” Kip said, more to himself than Rodger. “Not crazy like those last few Mercuries. Not as plain as a Ford. Maybe they finally found the sweet spot.”

He opened the driver’s door and slid into the front bench. The smell of new vinyl wrapped around him like a warm hand on the chest. Something stirred.

Rodger, sensing his advantage, said, “Wanna take her out?”

Kip nodded, already halfway there.

They headed west out of Fort Stockton on Ranch Road 18, top down, wind tugging at Kip’s hair and undoing the neat part he’d made that morning. The car rode smoother than a lullaby, floating over the pavement with just enough growl in the exhaust to remind you there was something eager under the hood. He let the big three-spoke wheel glide between his palms as the power steering made the car dance through the slight curves like a ballroom queen.

The air smelled of mesquite, sun-baked creosote, and just a hint of motor oil from a passing cattle truck. The road was cracked but forgiving, like Texas itself. As he accelerated, the warm air poured in over the windshield, bringing with it the scents of windblown pasture, dry earth, and distant cotton bales. The noise dropped as the car leveled out at 60, then 65. The only sounds were the low hum of the tires, the steady rhythm of the V8, and the distant hiss of the wind slicing past.

Kip felt something loosen in his chest. A knot he didn’t know was there began to untangle. He glanced in the side mirror and saw his old life growing smaller.

He tasted something strange on his tongue. Not dust. Not regret. Opportunity.

His throat tightened, and his mind flared back to that one night behind the gymnasium at Jim Bowie High. His first girlfriend—Marla Peterson, with the crooked smile and the daring hands—had kissed him like the world might end before first period. And then she gave him something more than a kiss. That heady, electric feeling in his blood? He hadn’t felt that again until this very moment, wind on his face, new Mercury at his command.

Rodger didn’t say a word. Smart move. The car was doing the talking.

The gunsight ornaments on the fenders seemed to point the way not just forward, but into the future. A future where the youngest president ever elected was about to replace the oldest. A future where Mercury was more than a car brand—it was a space program. A promise. A beginning.

Kip downshifted with the column selector, just to feel the torque pull him forward. The road rose and fell in gentle waves, and the car moved with grace, like it was born to eat up distance. And Kip felt it again—that pull toward something better. A version of himself that hadn’t been weighed down by routine, by reliability, by playing it safe.

Monterey. The name hit different now. California. Sunshine. Waves. A woman in a white dress laughing on a pier. Kip didn’t know who she was, but in his mind she was smiling at him.

The steering wheel framed more than just a speedometer. It framed a future. He had been at the Proving Grounds since they opened in ’55. Always steady, always dependable. Never flashy. Never the guy they picked for management. Just the one they leaned on when the flashy ones screwed up.

Maybe it was time. Maybe he’d drive back, park this Mercury out front, and walk straight into his boss’s office.

“Reward me,” he’d say. “Or I walk.”

And if they didn’t? Then maybe it was time he walked anyway. Time he chased something. Maybe to California. Maybe to Monterey. A place where his work ethic meant something. Where his style—his Gold Dust Metallic style—would get noticed. And the women? They’d see the difference. They’d know what a man like Kip Rudyard could offer.

He pushed the little button and the power antenna rose with quiet dignity. The radio crackled and caught the local KFSX signal just as Frank Sinatra came in clear, singing about dreaming the impossible dream. Kip didn’t believe in signs. Not usually. But this one? This one was from the heavens.

God had a voice like Sinatra and drove dual-exhaust Mercury convertibles.

Kip kept driving west. Just a few more miles.
Just to see where the road might go.
But even the best roads have to turn back.

He eased off the throttle and brought the Mercury around slow, the sun dipping lower, casting the convertible in that warm gold that made the paint seem like it had secrets.

Back at the dealership, Rodger was waiting, hands in his pockets, trying to look casual. Kip didn’t say much—he just gave a slow nod, the kind a man gives when a decision’s already been made in his bones.

Rodger grinned. “So? We writing it up?”

Kip looked at the car one more time. “Yeah. We are.”

The paperwork took longer than expected, but Kip didn’t mind. He signed each page like he was signing a peace treaty. By the time he pulled into the driveway back home, the porch light had flickered on. The Mercury coasted to a stop like it had always known the way.

He sat behind the wheel a minute longer. The car ticked in the silence, cooling down, metal settling. He stared ahead at nothing.

The thing about dreams—they don’t come with instructions. And some mornings you wake up not sure if what you chased was a promise… or a warning.

That night, Kip ironed his best shirt, polished his boots, and set his alarm like it mattered. He would drive to work in his new gold Mercury and demand the life he thought he’d earned.

What he didn’t know—couldn’t know—was that life doesn’t pay out just because you’re due. And sometimes, the car that carries you toward your future… is also the one that drives you off the map.



6 responses to “MERCURY, GOLD, AND IRON: Chapter 1”

  1. That last pic, headed through the Proving Grounds gate, it seems his sharp chrome fins have been shorn- perhaps foretelling issues yet to develop?

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