
By the time Kip crossed into South Dakota, the Mercury was crusted with five states’ worth of grit and his eyes felt scratchy from a thousand miles of squinting. The map was folded wrong and stained with burger grease. He wasn’t even sure if he’d made a wrong turn or if the road had just decided to wander off on its own.
The grass changed first—shorter, tighter to the ground like it was bracing for something. Then the sky opened wider, the kind of wide that made a man feel like a speck in a story he wasn’t invited to write. The towns got scarcer. The AM radio gave up entirely. Even the fence posts seemed tired.
He passed a rusted road sign so weather-beaten the name had flaked clean off. The only thing legible was a faded outline of South Dakota’s shape. Beneath it, someone had spray-painted: “YOU’RE ALREADY TOO LATE.”
That’s when he met La Dora.
She was parked off the side of the road in a 1951 Willys-Overland Jeep Station Wagon 4×4 the color of dried sage and survival. It squatted in the dust like a mule too stubborn to die. One tire was off. The jack looked homemade. There were bundles strapped to the roof, a jerry can hanging from the tailgate, and what might’ve been a coffee can full of wrenches sitting beside her boot.
La Dora was under the front end with a crowbar and a cigarette clamped between her teeth. When Kip pulled over, she didn’t look up.
“You ain’t from here,” she said.
“No ma’am.”
“You’re not law, are you?”
“No ma’am.”
“Well then, you can hand me that mallet. Unless Texans don’t believe in tools.”
Kip passed it down without a word, catching his first real look at her when she slid out from beneath the Willys. Her gray hair spilled out from a red bandana, wild and sun-bleached, blowing in the wind like a veil pulled back from a ghost bride. Her face was long and sharp, skin leathery but expressive, with cheekbones that looked carved rather than aged. Her eyes were hard to pin—a color between green and gray, like wet stone. She wore a denim jacket with the sleeves torn off and a canvas skirt dusted with clay. Her boots were scuffed to hell.
She might’ve been beautiful once. Now, she was something else entirely.
“La Dora,” she said, brushing off her palms. “No last name. That’s need-to-know only, and you don’t need to.”
“Kip.”
“Figures.”
She went back to work. Kip stood there like a question mark in boots.
He ended up following her to a place called Ghost County Line—a name she said with a smirk, like it was both a joke and a warning. It wasn’t on any map. Just a notch in the hills with two abandoned grain elevators, a pump house missing its pump, and a scattering of buildings that hadn’t quite given up yet.
La Dora made camp in a wind-scoured field near the last standing schoolhouse. She strung clothesline between the Willys and a cottonwood tree and hung up maps, hand-drawn diagrams, and weathered mimeographs that read like gospel pamphlets penned by someone with a shortwave radio and a long list of suspicions.
“You live out here?” Kip asked.
“I stay alert out here. I sleep lightly. I listen.”
“To what?”
“Everything.”
She cooked rabbit stew in a dented pot and handed Kip a chipped bowl. There was a young man sitting nearby—no older than twenty, thin as baling wire, quiet as fog. He wore a Korea-era fatigue jacket despite the heat and never made eye contact. Kip couldn’t tell if he was La Dora’s son, stray, or disciple. The boy stirred a tin cup of something dark and bitter and stared off at nothing.
“He got stuck out here,” La Dora said. “Like a needle in a groove.”
“He talk?” Kip asked.
“Only when it matters.”
Kip didn’t press. The boy didn’t blink.
That night, they sat beside the Willys, oil lantern hissing, stars burning holes through the sky. The wind never stopped.
“You ever wonder why you keep ending up next to women in station wagons?” La Dora asked.
Kip nearly choked on his coffee.
“You think that’s funny?”
“I think it’s a pattern. Patterns mean something.”
“Not everything means something.”
“Oh, honey,” she said, smiling with only half her mouth. “That’s exactly what they want you to think.”
She told him stories—about men who vanished after investigating weather balloons, about letters that arrived before the people who wrote them disappeared, about fires near missile silos the press never reported. She had a name for every shadow. A reason for every silence.
“You think the Cold War is about bombs,” she said, “but it’s about forgetting. About building so much fear we forget where we came from. They hide it under language. National defense. Energy research. Agricultural modernization.”
She tapped the roof of the Willys. “I keep everything I need in here. Food. Tools. Water. Printed truth. If it gets hot, I’m gone inside three minutes.”
Kip nodded. He didn’t agree. He didn’t disagree.
There was something in her that unnerved him—not just the paranoia, but the clarity. She wasn’t guessing. She was remembering.
In the morning, Kip woke to find her sitting cross-legged on the hood of the Willys, eyes closed, palms upturned on her knees, meditating beneath a slow-brewing storm. The sky over the Black Hills behind her was low and dark, a bruise rolling in from the edge of the world. Her gray hair whipped in the wind like a tattered flag, or the remnants of a veil that had once hidden a bride and now revealed something older, stronger—something elemental.
She opened one eye without moving. “You’re staring.”
“You’re sitting on the hood of a Jeep like you’re communing with ghosts.”
“I am.”
The young man was gone.
“Where’d he go?” Kip asked.
“He drifts. He’s not tethered to this side.”
“You mean alive?”
She shrugged. “Depends on the day.”
They drove into a town that didn’t have a name—just a grain elevator with graffiti and a dog that barked at clouds. La Dora needed fuel. Kip followed her into a garage where the attendant looked like he’d been embalmed with dust.
“You folks from around here?” the man asked.
“We’re between things,” La Dora said.
He nodded like that made all the sense in the world.
Later that day, they stopped at a ridge overlooking a field of wild sunflowers. The wind made waves in them like ghost dancers refusing to lie down.
“You feel that?” she asked.
“Feel what?”
“The memory. This land remembers. It remembers treaties, broken promises, blood spilled, secrets buried under wheat. This ain’t empty, Kip. It’s just not talking to you yet.”
Kip said nothing. But he felt it. In the pit of his stomach. In the ache in his hands.
He thought about Fort Stockton. About Marianne. About the missile article from Montana folded in his coat pocket. About the newspaper clipping left in his Mercury without explanation.
About the fact that someone was trying to tell him something.
And now, here he was—two station wagons, two women, and a land that refused to play dumb.
That night, a storm blew in. Wind howled. The Willys rattled. Kip slept in the Mercury, dreaming of blackbirds flying in formation over missile silos disguised as silos.
When he woke, La Dora was gone.
No tracks. No note. Just a stone placed on the hood of his car. Flat. Black. Warm to the touch.
He sat for a long time before starting the engine.
As he picked up the stone to pocket it, he noticed something tucked just beneath it—a scrap of parchment, the edge burned, the ink smeared but still legible:
“Follow the freight line to where the shadows stall. When the wind turns sweet, you’ll know you’re close.”
He didn’t know what it meant—not yet. But it felt like a direction carved out of fate.
He didn’t know if he’d see her again. But the ghost of her words trailed him like a CB signal bouncing through a canyon.
“Not everything means something,” he whispered. Then looked to the road.
And added, “But something always does.”










3 responses to “MERCURY, GOLD, AND IRON, Chapter 4”
I see an eye looking out of small hole chewed through the burlap bag Hairless mentioned. I don’t think the unidentifiable twisting, snarling wild animal is “calming” down any longer. It’s strategizing; it’s on high alert, waiting for the opportunity to show the world the chaos it’s capable of.
BTW,
“La Dora,” she said, brushing off her palms. “No last name. That’s need-to-know only, and you don’t need to.”
“Kip.”
“Figures.”
La Dora’s response to Kip is priceless.
This is just about the best series you have written. Thank you for writing it! Donation coming soon…
Who am I to argue?