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SALT WATER & SINS, CHAPTER 3:  Jump seats


By the third week, the air itself had softened. Even the shadows seemed slow. Galveston in July didn’t rush anything—not the heat, not the water, not the way your mind wandered. Topher found himself drifting, not in a bad way, but the kind of drift that made you forget where the days went.

The beach patrol trucks passed like clockwork. His clipboard grew more wrinkled and salt-stained by the day. He found sea glass in his shoes and forgot to care. Valerie brought him leftover pasta in reused cottage cheese tubs and always left the lid halfway off.

One day, she asked if he knew how to replace a heater hose clamp. He said yes before he even understood the question.

That’s how he ended up under the hood of the Country Squire, sweating through a borrowed rag and feeling every atom of her standing just over his shoulder. The clamp was stubborn, but she handed him the flathead without being asked, like she had read his mind. When it finally cinched, they both leaned back, and she laughed in a way that didn’t feel like permission, but felt close.

“You ever open the jump seats back there?” she asked.

“Didn’t know it had any.”

“That’s because no one does. Come on. Help me get the sand out.”

The tailgate swung open with a creak that seemed older than either of them. The Magic Door folded down and the glass hissed into the body like it was holding its breath. They knelt side by side, vacuuming out forgotten cracker wrappers and a single flip-flop that neither claimed. The jump seats unfolded with a thunk. Valerie sat in one and tilted her head.

“Your turn.”

Topher dropped into the other seat. Their knees brushed.

“I used to think this car was ugly as hell,” she said, pulling her feet up. “Now I think it’s honest.”

She ran a hand along the woodgrain.

“Did you name it?”

“Never needed to. It just is.”

Mr. Downing’s Buick Roadmaster sat at the curb like a chrome sentinel, Belfast Green with a Dover White roof that gleamed like powdered sugar. Its chrome quarter-panel gravel guards and bumper bullets flashed in the sunlight. The 15″ wire wheels wore knock-off center nuts and Coker Classic whitewalls that always looked freshly scrubbed. Valerie had once muttered that he must wax it in his dreams.

Downing himself was an artifact. High-waisted trousers, always a pressed shirt, and some kind of khaki or straw hat that made him look like he owned half of postwar Texas. His skin was brick-red and papery, his stare precise. He never said much to Topher—just nods and half-smiles that felt more like indictments than greetings.

The man was always out front, watering his grass with a drink in hand. Rumor had it he drank scotch neat before noon. Topher had no reason to believe otherwise.

It wasn’t just that Downing watched. It was how he watched. Patient. Silent. Like he knew something you didn’t. That made Topher uneasy in the exact way his father always had—watchful, withholding, never warm. Like being appraised and dismissed in the same breath.

That afternoon, as Valerie stood in the jump seat brushing sand off her legs, Topher caught Downing’s eye across the fence line. The man lifted his glass and gave the kind of smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes.

The wagon rattled down Seawall Boulevard just before dusk. Valerie drove with one hand, letting the wind play with her hair. Topher watched her from the passenger seat, trying not to watch too much. The ocean stretched flat and wide to their right, beachgoers packing up with their towels and Styrofoam coolers.

“Heard you made a name for yourself today,” she said.

“That so?”

“Dunleavy said you found three new erosion hot spots. Said you might be overqualified for beach-walking.”

Topher snorted. “He also said I should stay away from his ex-wife and anything with a carburetor I can’t afford to fix.”

“Sound advice,” she said.

They pulled into a gravel turnout near an old jetty. Valerie killed the ignition. The wagon ticked with heat.

“You ever miss home?” she asked.

Topher picked at the label of his drink. “Not really. I think it missed me more than I missed it.”

“Same.”

They watched the horizon fade from gold to bruised blue. The humidity pressed in close, but neither rolled down a window.

He wanted to reach for her hand. Didn’t.

Instead, she said, “We should head back before Downing calls the Coast Guard.”

When they pulled into the driveway, the Buick’s dome light was glowing. Mr. Downing wasn’t visible, but the light cast a soft, eerie glow across the chrome grille. It looked like the car had been exhaling in the dark.

Valerie hesitated. “That thing ever move?”

“Only to prove it can.”

Two nights later, the power went out. The whole block flickered once and went black, swallowed by a thick, moonless dark. Topher lit a candle and opened his front door just as Valerie knocked.

“You read minds now?”

“Only when they’re obvious,” she said, holding up a bottle of white wine and two mismatched coffee mugs.

They sat at his tiny kitchenette, elbows nearly touching. The candle flickered shadows against the wall. Valerie looked softer in candlelight, and older too. Not tired—weathered. Like a dock piling that had held fast through one too many storms.

They drank. Slowly. He asked her about the first time she came to Galveston.

“I was fifteen. My aunt lived in a boarding house a few blocks off Broadway. I fell in love with a lifeguard and got sun poisoning in the same week.”

She asked him if he’d ever run away from something he shouldn’t have. He said yes. She didn’t ask what.

“I almost left once,” she said. “Just after we got married. Packed a bag and everything. He came home and found it by the door. Didn’t say a word. Just put it back in the closet. Like it had never happened.”

Topher didn’t answer. He didn’t have anything that would’ve helped.

When they reached for the wine at the same time, their hands stayed touching a moment too long.

She pulled back. Slowly.

“Well,” she said, standing, “I should let you get some rest.”

Topher stood too. They faced each other, inches apart. The candle between them made shadows on her collarbone. Her eyes found his, and for a second, the air went still.

Then she kissed him. Not on the mouth. Not yet. Just the cheek. A brush of skin and wine and static.

“Don’t read too much into it,” she whispered.

And then she was gone.

The next morning, Topher walked the beach. The sky was pale and blank. Gulls screamed over the dunes. He watched a young couple kiss openly by the seawall, their hands in each other’s hair like no one was watching.

He looked away.

Back at the house, the Buick was idling. Mr. Downing sat behind the wheel, staring out the windshield. He didn’t flinch when Topher approached. Didn’t wave.

Topher stepped onto the porch. As he turned the knob, he glanced back.

Mr. Downing lifted his glass.

And smiled.

Some things don’t move fast.

But they still move.



7 responses to “SALT WATER & SINS, CHAPTER 3:  Jump seats”

  1. They are named ROADMASTER for a very good reason, and well-deserved. Yes, Cornfieldave, we share that thought, and while currently our only Roadmaster is a 1937 Phaeton – 80C, if I had the space I’d add a 1956 red and white convertible, and maybe a 4-door Roadmaster Riviera as well – but only with A/C. Grand Isle, Louisiana and Galveston share several similarities, not the least of which is the history of Jean Lafitte.

    Captain, as ever, I’m enjoying this one and looking forward to upcoming chapters.
    Thank You !

  2. I’m in my 80’s, and I’ve always wondered, and still do, about how this really works?

    The Cap is writing this, we are reading it, and in my mind’s eye, it only takes a paragraph or two, and we males already have our jeans down to our knees, and the Valerie’s have their summer dresses hiked up to their belt level! It’s a mutual – really quick, thing that … uh… just happens!

    But, here we are in chapter 10 (?) and they’re still playing footsie!

    So, my question is – is the “pants down/dress up” desire just as strong in females as it is in we males? If so, why are we still in chapter 10, waiting!

    [And, why do I have to sign in each time to send a comment?]

    • 1. If, after two paragraphs, Topher was already cattle-prodding the oyster ditch with the lap rocket, it wouldn’t make for much of a story, would it? Although, admittedly, I am glad to hear that’s the way things apparently work once one gets into their 80s. A more efficient use of time, to be sure. And something to look forward to.

      2. Signing in keeps random and anonymous folks from swinging by, dropping nuggets worthy of being deleted and moving on to the next thing to check off on their To-Do List. It provides a level of accountability sorely lacking in the world around us. It’s sort of a way of welcoming everyone to the big round table at the Grounds for Divorce, but requiring that the brown paper Piggly Wiggly bag covering their head be left at the door so we all know who everyone is. Even New Guy has to sign in.

      • Thanks, I just didn’t know if I was touching the wrong buttons…ulshggh…trying to comment!

  3. Gotta love that Buick Four-Holer!
    Almost too much of everything, but not quite.
    Mature yet not matronly, comfortable to the extreme,
    Inviting and accommodating, every thing just right.

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