
CHAPTER 2 OF A FIVE PART SERIES
The gleaming 727-233 had defied all expectations. Despite the odds, Ben C. Padilla and John M. Mutantu had taken flight from Angola, heading into the heart of the Atlantic Ocean. For a moment, it had all seemed surreal—like a dream half-remembered as they cruised above the vast ocean below. The massive aircraft hummed a deep, powerful tune, and the view from the cockpit was nothing short of magnificent, a canvas of endless blues and sunlit clouds. They were free, and yet the euphoria was tempered by an ever-present anxiety. The next steps were uncertain, but they were in the air. That much, at least, was real.
As the hours passed, however, the adrenaline began to wear off. The reality of their situation was starting to sink in: they were two untrained men flying a commercial airliner, with no clear plan, no map beyond the makeshift route they had cobbled together from random scraps of information, and no fuel left to spare for a smooth ride to their final destination.
Ben was at the controls, sweat glistening on his forehead. His hands gripped the yoke, knuckles white. The plane was a beast, and the control systems felt like they were trying to fight him at every turn. The sense of accomplishment from takeoff quickly gave way to panic as the reality of flying the 727-233 became evident. His only solace was the rhythm of the engines and the hum of the instruments in front of him.
John, meanwhile, sat quietly beside him, his face pale from lack of sleep. He had always been the mechanic, not the adventurer, and the weight of the situation was beginning to break through his usual bravado. Every now and then, he glanced over at Ben, watching his frantic movements as the plane began to tilt one way, then the other, veering off course.
“You’re still sure you know how to fly this thing?” John muttered, his voice barely audible over the drone of the engines.
Ben glanced over, his face tense. “I’ve got it under control,” he grunted. “We’re just—just—going to need a pit stop.”
And so, they arrived at Cape Verde—a small patch of islands that seemed like a hidden oasis in the vastness of the Atlantic. Their luck, it seemed, had run out. The plane was running low on fuel, and the atmosphere was thick with tension. With no time to waste, they made their move. Ben circled the plane around the Sal International Airport on the island of Sal, preparing for an emergency landing that he had no business attempting. They needed fuel, and this would have to do.
But as they came in for their descent, it became quickly apparent that Ben’s “landing skills” were far more theory than practice. The plane lurched violently in the wind, and the nose tipped down too far, then up again, before Ben fought to steady the aircraft. The massive 727-233 screeched against the tarmac, shaking the entire frame of the plane. Dust and debris flew up around them as the tires screeched in protest, finally coming to a halt at an angle that would have made any seasoned pilot break into a cold sweat.
The plane was intact, but the landing strip… well, not so much. The wheel marks were deep, and the runway was left with a visible scar from the rough touchdown. Ben exhaled sharply, wiping sweat from his brow, while John let out a nervous laugh, his hands still gripping the map like it was his last tether to sanity.
“Not quite like in the simulator, huh?” John said, his voice a mix of awe and disbelief.
Ben didn’t answer, his focus entirely on the plane’s next move. They needed to refuel and get out of there—quick.
Ben and John exited the cockpit, stepping into the humid Cape Verde air. The airport staff were still on their break when they landed, but that wouldn’t last long. An airport worker had already caught sight of them. Ben quickly ran through a cover story—something about covert operations and a classified mission involving a “test run.” He barely had time to think, but somehow, the worker seemed to buy it. They were good for now. Still, there was no time to waste.
Inside the terminal, chaos was already beginning to bubble. Ben tried his best to charm the local barmaid at the only bar in the terminal, throwing in some small talk about the island and its “untapped beauty,” but he couldn’t help but notice the looks that were starting to linger on them. The islanders weren’t fooled. They were too sharp.
She wasn’t buying it. The barmaid raised an eyebrow, her arms folded over her chest, as she polished a glass, her gaze calculating.
“I’ve heard my fair share of stories,” she said with a half-smile, barely glancing at him. “But yours? I’m not buying it.”
Ben chuckled nervously, feeling the heat of her gaze as she placed a glass of beer in front of him. “You wouldn’t believe half of it if I told you.”
She raised an eyebrow, clearly amused, but also smart enough to know when someone was trying too hard. “Maybe,” she said, “but I think you’re telling me just enough to make me curious.”
Before Ben could respond, the front door of the bar swung open with a sharp creak, and two locals strolled in, their laughter echoing through the small, dimly lit room. Ben watched them with a casual glance, then turned his attention back to the barmaid, who was now placing a fresh towel over her shoulder and taking a step back.
“Listen, I’ve got work to do,” she said, her tone turning more serious. “You should probably head out before someone else decides to ask questions you’re not ready to answer.”
Ben was about to protest when something in her expression shifted—a slight hesitation that didn’t escape his notice. She looked over her shoulder, scanning the bar before her eyes lingered on the door. A knowing look passed between them, like an unspoken understanding, before she turned back to face him.
“You’re in a hell of a lot more trouble than you know,” she muttered under her breath. Then, as though she’d reconsidered, she lowered her voice and added, “But if you’re really heading out, I’ll help you. Just… follow my lead.”
The barmaid’s role grew steadily as the chapter continued. She seemed to sense that the tension was rising, like the tightening strings of a bow ready to snap. Her curiosity about Ben and John’s situation shifted from cautious interest to a kind of reluctant empathy. Maybe she had a sense of adventure, too, or perhaps she had grown tired of the monotony of island life and the endless cycle of unspoken rules and old gossip.
When it became clear that Ben and John’s time on the island was running out, and the authorities were closing in, the barmaid’s decision shifted dramatically. She quickly made her way into the back, grabbing her jacket from the dingy coat hook by the door. There was no turning back now. As she slipped out the back door and onto the quiet street, she found Ben and John already on the move, their pace quickened by the urgency of the moment.
She caught up to them by the roadside, her boots clicking against the pavement as she jogged toward them. Ben looked over his shoulder, surprised but not shocked to see her.
“You’re coming with us?” he asked, his voice a little hoarse from the rush.
She nodded, eyes steely with resolve. “I’m not staying here to be another rumor. If you’re going, I’m going.”
The three of them made their way back to the airport, the noise of the distant planes and the increasing sound of sirens echoing behind them. The barmaid, now in full stride, kept pace with Ben and John. The Land Cruiser was abandoned, a metaphor for their decision to leave behind anything that tied them to the island. But now, with the plane in sight, the stakes were higher than ever. The 727-233 loomed in the distance, its massive body a symbol of freedom and escape—but also a vessel for unknown futures.
As they neared the aircraft, the sound of running footsteps grew louder. The authorities had finally caught wind of their plan, and the final window of opportunity was closing fast. Ben and John ran ahead, and just as they neared the plane’s door, the barmaid paused, her hand on the metal ladder.
“What about me?” she asked, her voice filled with a mix of determination and doubt.
Ben turned to her, his face lit by the warm glow of the plane’s interior lights. He had no time for lengthy discussions, but there was an unspoken acknowledgment in his eyes that this wasn’t just about getting away—it was about what they all left behind.
“You coming?” he asked, his breath short from the sprint.
She hesitated for a moment, glancing back at the distant lights of the airport, then looked up at the plane. “Hell,” she said with a smile that was part defiance, part resignation, “I’ve already missed one chance. Not gonna miss another.”
And with that, she ran the final few steps to join them on board, leaving behind the life she knew—just as the Land Cruiser had been left in the dust.
Ben slammed his fist against the dashboard of the Land Cruiser as they pulled up to the plane. “This is it, John,” he said, his voice low, the weight of the situation finally catching up with him. “We’ve come this far, but we might not make it to the Azores. We’re running on fumes.”
John stared ahead at the massive aircraft, the looming question hanging in the air between them: Could they make it to the next stop, or was this the end of their high-flying heist?











3 responses to “IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE… CHAPTER 2: “Trouble in Paradise””
Two alternative storylines: one with a Landcruiser, one with a barmaid.
somethings missing. The story of the Land Cruiser…
Great story so far, Cappy.
For this chapter I broke out some hummus & pita bread. Immediate teleportation 30-40 years ago. Front seat of a beige SUV on a gritty tarmac waiting for some derelict airplane hours after its ETA. A dog or two wandering between a main brick building and a quonset hut hanger or two. When Boeing introduced the 737, all the old 727s went overseas. It wasn’t long before poor maintenance and too many emergency landings on gravel runways in Africa took their toll. One time after an Ethiopian Air 727 landed smoking, I asked my courier if he was going to continue to the next stop. He said, “Yep, it was smoking when it landed in Nairobi, too.”