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SALT & SOIL, CHAPTER SEVEN: A Black and White Ending


The last of seven chapters.


Morning came slow to Fort Stockton. The sun had to climb over the Davis Mountains before it could lay a finger on the courthouse square, and that delay always gave the place a feeling of suspended judgment, as if the town were waiting for its sentence. On this particular morning, the air was still, the caliche dust flattened from the night dew, and the streets stood empty, like they’d been cleared for a parade no one wanted to see.

That was when the Cadillac came.

It wasn’t loud. The 1970 Fleetwood Superior Sovereign Landaulet hearse didn’t need to make a spectacle. It glided in, long and white as a church linen, its chrome grin wide, its black landau roof like a preacher’s hat pulled low. The headlights were off, but it shone just the same — polished metal catching the weak dawn. Cutter was at the wheel, his posture stiff, his hands firm, as if he’d been born to this steering wheel, not chasing death across dusty roads in borrowed vans and rust-bitten pickups. The hearse fit him. It reclaimed him.

Behind the Cadillac came the wreckage of the caravan: the Dodge van with its flame paint dulled under a tarp, the yellow Firebird sitting cocky and tired like a cheerleader after the dance, the Highboy still coughing dust through its vents. The Airstream, streaked and dented now, was pulled off under the mesquites, forgotten, its aluminum gleam already dimming. All that madness had burned itself out, and only the hearse rolled clean, ready for ceremony.

Parker McHale was the first to step from the Highboy. Notebook under her arm, cigarette in her mouth, her eyes darted over the scene like a hawk’s. She wasn’t there to grieve; she was there to capture, to trap words before they slipped away. Ash fell on her sleeve, but she didn’t brush it off. She scribbled as Cutter stopped the Cadillac at the courthouse steps. Later, her editor would marvel at the opening lines of Salt & Soil: “The long black and white car came like judgment at dawn, and Fort Stockton bowed its head without knowing why.”

Topher wasn’t marveling at anything. He sat slumped on the curb, his knuckles raw, his lip split, his eyes hollow from jealousy and failure. Shannon Hudspeth leaned against her Firebird a few feet away, yellow hot pants brighter than the car itself, cigarette dangling, hair tousled from the night’s storm. She didn’t spare Topher a glance. That cut deeper than any punch Dax Ramirez had landed.

And Dax? He was leaning against the Diablo, grin sharp as ever, crates still visible in the bed though most had been claimed by deputies in the night. The illegal arms shipment traced back to Mayor Goodman had been loaded too heavy with politics for Fort Stockton to carry. Word had already spread — Goodman’s reelection campaign financed with rifles and ammunition meant for deserts further south. But trials in Pecos County had a way of drying up before they began. Witnesses drifted like tumbleweeds when the wind got too hot. By the time it reached a courtroom, Goodman would be shaking hands at the Country Club barbecue, smiling for the Sunday edition.

But that wasn’t what held the town’s breath.

It was the coffin.

The pine box had traveled more miles than some men — Oldsmobile, Dodge, Firebird, Airstream, Highboy — across gravel, through cantina light, under motel neon. Now it sat in Cutter’s hands again, the last stop on its odyssey. He opened the hearse’s rear door with a slow reverence, polished handles gleaming, and with Mason McCullough’s help, slid the coffin onto the rollers. Mason’s boots were dusty, his shirt half-tucked, but his grip was steady. Whiskey stood beside him, arms folded, silent as always. Childhood had bound those two together, and this morning was no different.

The lid creaked when Cutter lifted it. Parker stopped writing. Even Shannon flicked her ash aside and leaned in.

Inside lay Valerie.

Her face was pale, framed by hair that had once caught Gulf breezes in Galveston and men’s stares alike. She wasn’t young, not anymore, but she carried the weight of memory. For Topher, she was unfinished business, a ghost of his own pride. He had never let go of the idea that he’d been chosen once, gifted something the rest of the world could not touch. But in truth, she had been just a woman, full of her own frailties and deceits. Still, there she lay, embalmed in silence, the prize no man could hold onto.

Cutter closed his eyes a moment, the scent of pine and preservative mixing with his own sweat. He thought of Oswald, of graves dug and graves resealed, of history put back in the ground like a snake you couldn’t kill. This was the same — burying not just flesh, but the lies wrapped around it. He pressed the lid closed.

Topher broke then. He lunged, reaching for the coffin, but Dax caught him by the shoulder. The two struggled, dust rising, Parker’s pencil scratching again, Shannon’s laughter low and cutting. “You thought you were lucky,” she said to Topher, her tone like a whip. “But luck’s just a story you tell yourself before the end.”

Mason pulled Topher back, firm and final. “It’s over, son,” he said. His voice carried the weight of authority, of a man who had lived long enough to know when a fight was done. Topher sagged in his arms, tears carving tracks down his dust-caked face.

“Over for him,” Dax muttered, lighting a fresh cigarette.

Shannon smirked, unbothered. She had tempted fate, tempted men, tempted death, and she stood untouched. If her heart beat, it beat in stone. She would move on, as she always did, leaving wreckage in her wake, her Firebird ready to roar at the first sign of daylight’s heat.

Cutter, though, had no such freedom. He was bound to the hearse, to the coffin, to the work he had been called to. For all the madness of the chase, he belonged to death’s dignity, not its chaos. He climbed back behind the wheel of the Cadillac, squared his shoulders, and prepared to drive.

Parker closed her notebook with a snap. She had what she needed: lust, jealousy, greed, violence, a coffin carried across Texas like contraband of the soul. Salt & Soil was already written in her mind, each scene sharpened, each line meant to stab and scar. It would be her best-seller, her entry into the cold, sharp world of crime literature. She knew it, and in knowing, she smiled.

Mason wasn’t smiling. But his pockets were heavier. The reward money for Valerie’s return — dead or alive — would be paid. With it, he’d secured 18% of Frontier Ford, a piece of the Straight Shootin’ Dealership itself. Irony, maybe, that a crime’s conclusion should be measured in ownership shares, but in Fort Stockton, money always spoke louder than memory.  And the dealership needed the cash, having spent untold thousands in fines and legal fees as a result of being caught rolling back odometers.

Goodman’s scandal would pass. Shannon would seduce again. Parker would write. Cutter would bury. And Topher — Topher would not escape his own ruin. By sunset, he would lie in a cell, stripped of the illusions that had driven him.

The square was quiet as Cutter rolled the Cadillac forward, its whitewalls whispering against gravel, its chrome casting bent reflections of the town it served. The procession formed loosely behind: Mason and Whiskey in their dented truck, Parker with her notebook, Shannon in her Firebird, Dax’s Diablo gleaming spitefully. But the hearse led, as it always did, carrying not just Valerie but the whole damn story, boxed and sealed, rolling to its rightful rest.

And Fort Stockton watched, as it always did, from behind café windows and hardware counters, gossip already forming, history already being twisted into something it never was.



3 responses to “SALT & SOIL, CHAPTER SEVEN: A Black and White Ending”

  1. I agree with Olbugger; Salt & Soil is a great story… It answered two of three questions I had on August 2nd and we’ll know about the last one soon.
    – Topher’s real estate holdings are approximately 8×8.;
    – Valerie is probably tending Marigolds outside St Peter’s Gates high above Texas.;
    – September 6th at the Orpheum featuring performances by Branford, Delfeayo, and Jason Marsalis was a scheduling conflict for Mr. Downing, but Delfeayo Marsalis has an upcoming show at Snug Harbor Jazz Bistro on Wednesday, October 8, 2025. I’m hoping Marty and Mr. Downing will make an appearance in the Buick for that show.

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