
Stewart Somerville had never been a flashy man. Even as a boy, he’d been the type to smooth out his hair with a damp palm instead of grease and turn in his baseball cards for model rockets. By the time he and Trudy graduated from Jim Bowie High School, they’d been dating long enough that most people thought the wedding had already happened. It hadn’t—but it followed not long after.
Now, twelve years later, the Somervilles had three boys, a split-level in RoadRunner Estates, and a lawn half-covered in plastic army men and dog-chewed Tonka trucks. From a distance, it looked like The American Dream.
Stew worked middle management out at The Proving Grounds, where this summer’s big project was repaving the entire test track—hot, sticky, expensive work with a deadline nobody thought could be met. Trudy stayed home with the boys, kept the house in shape, clipped coupons with deadly precision, and wore her housecoat more often than not. They didn’t fight much, not in the way neighbors did, but lately there was a hollow in their words and a quiet chill in the house, like somebody had forgotten to close the freezer door.
Rice Krispies Treats had once been gooey, sweet, and messy. Now they were rare, dry, and seemed to be an obligation rather than a coveted dessert. Stew had noticed. He noticed a lot. But he didn’t know how to say any of it out loud. So instead of talking to Trudy, he made a decision.
They needed a new car.
Not just any car. Something that said they were still young, still thriving, still in love. Something big, bold, and beautiful. Something Trudy could drive to Piggly Wiggly in and not feel like she was one more faded mother with three kids in the backseat and a ham hock defrosting on the dashboard.
So one Saturday, Stew told her he had to go into work. Instead, he drove straight to Frontier Ford-Lincoln-Mercury, “Home of the Straight Shootin’ Deal.”
Rodger, always with one arm halfway out of his too-short sport coat, met him at the front door. He didn’t even bother with a full pitch—he could read a man’s face like a service manual.
“Stew,” Rodger said, tapping a Montclair brochure with a ballpoint pen. “I know what you need.”
Fifteen minutes later, Stew was behind the wheel of a red 1966 Mercury Montclair 4-door hardtop, the V8 humming like a man with no regrets. They took it for a spin down Houston Street, Rodger sliding into salesman confessional mode.
“This thing’s got power steering, power brakes, cornering lights, cruise control…” Rodger tapped the dashboard like a preacher thumping scripture. “And air conditioning, Stew. Cool and comfortable, even when it’s 102 and you’ve been driving all day. You and Trudy check into the Holiday Inn in Abilene? You step out refreshed. You hear me? Refreshed.”
He said it in a way that made Stew nod without knowing why. Rodger winked, suggesting things about motel trips and marital rebirths without saying a single inappropriate word. And the V8 under the hood? Rodger made it sound like a fountain of manhood.
By the time they looped back to the lot, Stew was sold. The ’57 Fairlane went on trade. Paperwork was signed. Keys exchanged. Hope, like the Montclair’s dual exhaust, left a faint trail behind him.
He took the long way home, passing the Dairy Twin and the high school football field, imagining Trudy riding shotgun, her hair bouncing, the boys quiet in the backseat, impressed and at peace. He pulled into their driveway just past noon, tires rolling smooth over the concrete.
He honked twice.
The boys came first, all three of them whooping and swarming the car like ants to picnic syrup. They threw open the doors and rolled the windows up and down with awe.
Trudy didn’t come out until the third honk.
She stepped through the front door, housecoat cinched, hair pinned back, her eyes squinting at the sunlight like it was an accusation. She didn’t smile. She didn’t gasp. She didn’t say anything.
Stew jogged to meet her at the steps, nearly tripping over a toy rifle.
“Well?” he said, breathless. “Whaddya think?”
Trudy looked at the Montclair.
“That’s red.”
“Candy Apple Red,” Stew corrected, grinning. “With a white vinyl roof. You oughta see the interior. All-new vinyl. Power everything. Air conditioning. Boys’ll ride in style. We can go down to Kerrville next month, maybe—see the hills?”
Trudy crossed her arms. “You trade the Ford?”
“Yeah. Got a great deal. Payments aren’t bad. It’s a good investment. For the family. For us.”
She nodded slowly. Not in agreement, but in acknowledgment, like she’d heard the weather forecast.
“I figured,” she said.
Stew looked past her, into the house. “Come on, let’s take it for a spin. Just you and me. Kids can stay—”
“I have a roast in the oven,” she replied.
Frustration bubbled. The boys were already fighting over the backseat. One of them turned the radio on and was messing with the tuner.
“Inside!” Stew barked. “Now!”
They scrambled.
Trudy didn’t move. She looked tired but not in a sleepy way—in the way that’s beyond tired, when the exhaustion comes from somewhere deeper, older.
Stew ran a hand through his hair. “Trudy, damn it, I’m trying here. I bust my ass at the Grounds, I put in overtime, I come home to… to silence. To microwave meals. To you acting like I’m just part of the furniture. I do something nice. I bring this home—this beautiful car, this—this gesture. And you don’t even blink. What am I supposed to do?”
She didn’t say anything.
“When was it?” he asked finally, his voice cracking. “When was it you stopped loving me?”
Trudy didn’t flinch. She looked at the Mercury. At its perfect paint. The shiny chrome. The proud stance in the driveway like it belonged to a television commercial family. Then she looked back at him.
And said it:
“The exact moment?”
He nodded.
“The day you stopped sitting next to me on the couch.”
Silence spread like spilled coffee.
She turned and went back inside, shutting the screen door without a slam, just a quiet click.
The Montclair gleamed in the sun.
Stew stood there, hands on his hips, unsure whether to follow her, get back in the car, or disappear completely. The truth in her words rang louder than the horn. He hadn’t remembered it. Not the day, not the reason, not the couch. But somewhere in his gut, he knew she was right.
The problem hadn’t started with the car. It wouldn’t be solved with it either.
Later, the neighbors came by to admire the Mercury. Compliments were made. Praise was given. The boys told everyone they had air conditioning now, just like astronauts probably did.
But Stew didn’t go for another drive that day. Or that week.
The Montclair sat in the driveway, brilliant and useless, like a birthday cake for someone who’d already left the party.
Somewhere down the line, maybe they’d fix it—whatever “it” was. Or maybe they’d keep going, like so many couples did, with polite silences and matching retirement accounts. Maybe the Mercury would one day be passed down to one of the boys, who’d take his sweetheart to the Dairy Twin in it and swear that love could be restored with the right combination of horsepower and high expectations.
But for Stewart and Trudy Somerville, the answer had been given.
A car can carry a family.
But it can’t carry a heart that’s no longer in it.











2 responses to “THE EXACT MOMENT”
I see what you did there. Sneakin one of those real slice of life stories in on us.
You say you’re a ghost in our house
And I realize I do think I see through you
“Go on Ahead” – Liz Phair