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THE BOY WHO BORROWED A WAR, Part II


Part II of a two part tale of fate by mistake.


The road to Saint-Martin-du-Pin was marked by hedgerows that looked like sleeping giants. Somewhere, a cow bell clonked once, then decided against it. The blackout lights were little moons in their own right, enough to keep him between the ditches. He shifted the way he’d been taught—pause, feel, finish—like a pastor blessing bread. The Dodge liked him and said so in the way a machine says so: by doing what it was made to do, easy-like.

At the edge of town he slowed. The Germans had put up a sawhorse painted with a skull and crossbones, which struck him as both dramatic and not very helpful, as it didn’t say which part was the danger. A sentry stepped out with a hand up. The man had the look of someone pulled from a warm bed: hair flat on one side, bayonet pointed at nothing in particular.

Elmer lifted his hand with the same peace in it. “Bonsoir,” he said, then realized he had been taught “bonjour.” He forgot which was which. He settled on “Howdy,” which had the benefit of being honest.

The sentry frowned. He took two steps forward and smacked his boot on a loose cobblestone—fool luck turned out the sentry’s enemy as much as any Texan’s. He stumbled. Elmer did what he always did when something stumbled—reached out to steady it. The Dodge, however, being not a person, misunderstood the gesture as a request to continue. It crept forward in low as the man tried to decide whether to right himself or shout.

The sawhorse tipped. The sentry, flustered, grabbed it. The sawhorse knocked over the second sawhorse, which had been lazily leaned against the first. The chain between them slid and rang on stone. The Dodge, obedient to gravity and the memory of instructions, eased through the opening and into Saint-Martin-du-Pin with the reluctant sigh of an usher letting you sit after the curtain’s gone up.

If the enemy had been properly awake, the story would end right there, a lesson about midnight and rules. But the town had been occupied long enough to breed sloppiness. A squad slept in the schoolroom where the chalkboard still read “les saisons.” A man set to watch the square had quit for a cigarette two doors down. Someone in an upstairs window had put a blanket over a lamp to dim it and then fallen asleep before the cloth could catch.

Elmer drove toward the bell tower because he could not imagine a bakery in France that wasn’t near a church. He parked half a block away behind a stack of barrels stamped with German initials. He tugged the handbrake and listened to the engine slow its song. He climbed out and breathed bread—the smell of it doing to his empty stomach what music does to feet.

Lise found him before he could knock. “Mon ange,” she whispered, then corrected herself: “My—Elmer.” Her hair was pulled back and hid nothing of her face. She led him by the hand into a room where the ovens had been banked and the air was warm enough to make a man weep. She pressed his fingers. She had a scrap of paper and a pencil and drew a little map, not to the town but to the way through it.

“There is a patrol,” she said, careful and slow, the way a teacher speaks to a child who is clever but needs all the corners rounded. She pointed to the bell tower. “They keep their radio there. It is not watched well at night. The cord is bad—ah—how to say—loose. If we pull, it will fall. Boom.” She made her hand into a beak and snapped it shut.

“Elmer,” she said, as if convincing herself of something too. “You are brave.”

He wasn’t. He was steady. If steadiness can pass for bravery in a pinch, then that was the pinch they were in.

“Do you have rope?” she asked.

“Got a winch,” he said, pointing with his thumb back at the truck as if it were a mule that knew its own name.

They went out together. The square held the sort of silence that follows a gossip’s last sentence. He backed the WC-40 toward the base of the bell tower as if easing up to a trailer hitch. The bell was older than any war and bigger than any man’s temper. The Germans had not come to church, but they had come to height, which is the same thing if you’re listening for signals.

Elmer pulled the cable, guided it under the tower’s lip, and looped it twice the way he’d done to pull stumps for Thelma’s clotheslines back home. He set the anchor, tasted the rain, and climbed behind the wheel. Lise aimed him with her small hand, that perfect little compass. He set the throttle and let the clutch out the way you talk to a skittish colt.

At first the bell only hummed, which felt like talking politics at a funeral—rude but survivable. Then something in the old stone gave like kindness. The tower leaned an inch, then a foot. The bell swung and struck a note that stopped a dog mid-scratch. A radio upstairs coughed static and died the kind of death a man dies with his boots on. The tower let go the way a stubborn thought lets go after sleep, and the top yard of it slid into the square like a drunk sitting down hard.

Lise grabbed his sleeve. “Now,” she said, and they ran. The Germans, who preferred order, took a few seconds to recognize novelty. In those seconds, the Résistance opened shutters. A boy with the calves of a sprinter kicked a crate into the alley to block a motorcycle. Somebody threw oil on the cobbles and muttered an apology to the Virgin. A woman with a face like a hawk tripped a soldier on the stairs and blessed herself crosswise as he clattered down.

Elmer did what he always did when the world wanted a straight line: he drove one. He nosed the Dodge into the square, slewed the rear end to make a barrier, and cut the engine so he could hear the difference between yelling in French and yelling in German. Lise darted like a barn swallow, gathering two children from a doorway and pushing them into the bakery’s cellar. Someone in a window dropped a basket, a head of cabbage thumped out and rolled into a boot heel, and the man wearing the boot heel cursed God in a language that sounded like furniture being moved.

The captain’s Dodge had a .30 caliber mounted behind the windshield, a polite little tongue of steel waiting to become impolite. Elmer had never fired it. He did not now. He stood behind it, broad as a gate, and shouted in a voice he used for calling cattle out of a wash—loud, honest, surprised to hear itself. “Stay put!” he yelled in English, which sometimes works in a pinch because everyone knows the tone if not the words. “Stop your foolin’!” he added, because it helped.

Two scared Germans came around the corner trying to be brave and tripped over the rope that still hummed from the winch. One dropped his rifle. The other raised his hands at the same speed his eyebrows climbed his forehead. Elmer motioned them behind the truck like guests arriving early to a party. It is hard to argue with a man who wants you to be safe behind something.

By the time the captain arrived—livid, then confused, then something else entirely—there were eight German soldiers sitting on the pavement with expressions that suggested the world had gone sideways because the big boy with the calm eyes had asked it to. The bell lay canted like a huge ear. The bakery door stood open, breathing butter. The town, which had been draped in a blanket of somebody else’s schedule, was waking up underneath and stretching as if to say well look at that, we’re still here.

The report the captain wrote later used precise language in which miracles become “opportunities exploited.” He wrote of “an unanticipated disruption of enemy communications” and “the rapid consolidation of civilian elements under provisional Allied supervision.” He did not write that his Dodge had been “borrowed.” He wrote that it had “been situated to advantage.”

He did not write about Lise at all, because she was not in his chain of command or his world of paperwork. He watched, though, as she kissed Elmer’s cheek in the middle of the square and said something musical that made the cook elbow a sergeant and whisper, “Well, I’ll be.”

The captain stood with his hands on his hips, pipe forgotten, and looked at the boy. “Private Garza,” he said. “Did you or did you not take my vehicle without permission?”

Elmer tugged his cap down as if to push his blush back inside. “I borried it, sir,” he said. “Just for a little while.”

The captain worked his mouth as if trying to spit out a toothpick that wasn’t there. “You do understand,” he said, “that you have—by accident or providence—saved this town a month of grief and us a week of trouble.”

Elmer nodded politely. “Yes, sir.”

“You also damaged a bell that predates the Louisiana Purchase.”

“I can put the rope back, sir,” Elmer offered.

The captain looked at the bell, then at the boy, then at Lise, and something soft and almost fatherly slipped through the iron of his officer’s bearing. “Tell you what, Private—how about I teach you to drive this Dodge properly.”

“Yes, sir,” Elmer said, trying not to mention that he already had.

They left Saint-Martin-du-Pin like a fair that packs up overnight, leaving only the memory of noise and a few bright scraps stuck in tree branches. Lise pressed a paper bag into Elmer’s hands—bread, wrapped tight—and tucked inside it a small photograph of herself looking straight into the lens the way brave people do. He put it in his Bible between Psalms and Proverbs without knowing why, only that it felt right to keep wisdom side by side with singing.

Back across the Channel, orders came, as orders do. The captain sent a letter to a cousin in Philadelphia asking for a favor at the War Department regarding a private from Texas who was “durable, honest, and possessed of a rare knack for not dying when dying would be inconvenient.” The letter disappeared into the miles of desks. But in a corner of the motor pool, a sergeant passed along a rumor about a decoration that might wander down the line if someone remembered the paperwork.

Months later, under a postwar sky that could not decide on blue or gray, Elmer stepped off a train in Fort Stockton with a driver’s license in his pocket and a mechanic’s patch sewn neat onto his duffel. Thelma hugged him as if the Atlantic were still in play. At Grounds for Divorce they set a cup of coffee in front of him and a slice of bread from a new recipe Rex had been trying—something he called “French,” which mostly meant it was a little too soft and had ideas. Elmer took one bite and smiled that slow, complete smile of his.

“Bread’s good,” he said.

“Everything good?” Thelma asked.

“I think so,” he said, and meant it. He put Lise’s photograph on the table and smoothed its edges flat.

Fort Stockton did what it always did—it listened, then told the story back better. In some versions, Elmer had knocked down the bell tower with his bare hands. In others, he’d aimed the Dodge like a rifle and shot the chain with his headlights. In one, he married Lise and taught her to make tortillas in a kitchen with a new kind of stove that scared her at first and then turned docile under her hand. The truth was simpler: a not-quick boy had been steady at the right time, and love had been a map he could follow.

Years down the road, when the Dodge at the VFW parade wore a flag and a fresh coat of paint and a new set of stories, you could find Elmer standing near the tailgate, hand on the fender the way you touch a shoulder when you don’t have words. Kids would ask him if it was the same truck from the war. He’d say, “No, sir, but she’s a cousin.” He never bragged. He never forgot the feel of a winch cable through wet gloves. He never said he’d stolen anything. He had, after all, brought it back like he found it, only now the town it had carried through the night was his, and the whole berg of Saint-Martin-du-Pin, which had made room for his size and his heart, felt closer than a map would suggest.

Sometimes he’d take the license out of his wallet and look at it the way men look at photographs of impossible things. The world had kept its promise in a circle-cornered way: he’d gotten the license he set out for. It had cost him miles, and a bell, and a piece of himself he could never properly name. It had given him a story folks would tell until the telling wore smooth.

“Red means stop,” Thelma would say, driving with both hands on the wheel of her old Plymouth as if it were the reins of a mule with opinions.

“Green means go,” Elmer would say, smiling.

“And yellow?” she’d prompt, with that little sideways glance of hers.

“Means decide,” he’d say, and think of a square in a French town where he’d decided without being quick at all—only steady, only brave by accident, only exactly himself. And if he ever heard a bell in the distance, he’d pause a second and listen hard and say a prayer for a place where love and luck and a borrowed Dodge had tipped the world a few inches the right way.



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